Went to simplicity - comments welcome

I just redid the website. I took a simplicity approach. www.goodknightentertainment.com.

Scotch, does that logo look familiar? LOL

Here are my comments, though you may not like. :(

1 Logo is WAY too big and should be to the left, never centered.
2 Always leave white space beteen the menu and the body of the page and the body of the page and the bottom. No one reads the bottom text.

Honestly, go back to the way it was before. This looks like my first web page on WebTV when I was learning HTML. I'm not trying to be rude, but this doesn't leave a good taste in my mouth.

And yes, I am thinking from a bride's perspective. :)

Hmmm..........sorry Knight but it looks very generic to me. What was your old site? Do you have a link?

I liked the old site better as well. Sorry Tom.

Arnaldo:

I wouldn't have asked if I didn't want the critique.

This is the kind of input I want. Thanks to all.

Take a look now - www.goodknightentertainment.com.

I know there's some stray character here; the WYSIWYG editor the host uses seems to do that. I'll clean that part up tonight.

DOH, another advantage to the f/t DJ, the ability to clean up web pages as needed. LOL.

Links do not work.

Karaoke is spelled wrong.

It is very generic. pretty blah.

Karl

The bride's tongue is hot. ;)

Maybe a different pic from a wedding.

The bride's tongue is hot. ;)

Maybe a different pic from a wedding.


No, she's not ... Is she? ... I never noticed.

No, she's not ... Is she? ... I never noticed.

It sure looks like it. :sqeek:

Tom (Brother Knight),
Your request date or instant price quote.....way too much crap to fill out. If I was a bride, I would move onto the next site.
Bride's want instant gratification. Keep it simple.

Just some thoughts from someone with no marketing experience.

John (4th degree)

Unfortunately, that's the stuff required by DJ Intelligence. I am really thinking about making the shift to the one that sponsors here. I need to check that out.