Ya want the truth or sugarcoated?
1) Page Title is the page title. Not good.
2) Ditch the packages and options. Just makes you look like every other DJ w/ rates posted. And shoppers will see rates 1st.
3) Commercial Accounts. huh?????
4) DJ Placement - yeah, we consult for free. Save it for the meetings.
5) 10 questions to ask? Ditch it. Not needed.
6) Your contact info/name and number/etc should be at the top of every page.
7) Needs pictures. Not generic but emotion/action packed of YOUR recent clients having fun.
8) BIOS. Thank goodness no silly DJ w/ silly grin and mic in face shots.
9) Get some GOOD copy and a reason to get them to call - plus call to action.
That is all I could find for now.